Saturday, September 22, 2007

editing help...

I'm editting my portofolio right now. I want to make it really tight. But, it's hard to do it on my own. I'm wandering if I should have only one story or two... Or, I should add some singles from those extra stories. I also think there are some redundants or something in the singles that would bring down the whole thing. If someone has some to tell me which ones suck and I should take out, I'd appreciate it.

Singles & one story
http://ikuruphoto.com/20070921PortfolioGallery/index.htm

extra stories:

http://ikuruphoto.com/webgallerystoryextra/index.htm
http://ikuruphoto.com/webgallerystoryextra2/index.htm
http://ikuruphoto.com/webgallerystoryextra3/index.htm

5 comments:

Ryan Gladstone said...

MS - 1,4,5,6, and 7 are my favorites for a tight edit.

Ryan Gladstone said...

Your arrow rock story is a nice slice of life, but the story isn't as compelling. I would advocate pulling a single from it as it isn't as good as your MS work.

Ryan Gladstone said...

My only issue with the third story, and I'm not sure if it matters, is that it is somewhat thematically similar.

steveremich said...

also consider who you will be sending the portfolio to. You would send a different one to Sports Illustrated then you would to TIME. Every publication has different requirements and values. I wish we could have one, but it is probably not wise.

Aaron said...

Ikuru, for the singles, I would consider numbers 1,2,3,5,8,10,11,13,14,18. Are you going to make a story out of the racing pictures?